i finished a story the other day and it is called the halloween disaster



Introducing Jo Jo lane the best detective ever.
“Move Jo Jo I can’t see the TV” kylie said
“kylie how can you not like the same things as me we are twins” I said
“Jo Jo let your sister watch the tv” mum said.
“Mum me and my friends were wondering if we could go out trick or treating” I said trying to sound convincing
“I can come too and my friends” Kylie said
“no way your to little its not safe” I said trying to at grown up
“I am only quarter of an hour younger then you Jo Jo” kylie said smartly
“don’t try and act cool kylie because your not” I said
“Stop know girls Jo Jo let Kylie go with you” mum said

“nnnnnnoooooooooo MUM!!!” I said in a winy voice
“yes Jo Jo now go and get out of your uniform” mum said
kylie and I walk out kylie look at me and smiled I slammed my door and said stuff you kylie.
We went to the costume higher to get our Halloween out fits their were so many thing to chose from. Firstly I got a witches out fit i went into the changing rooms to put my out fit on I came out to see kylie was wearing the same thing
mum said smartly “I guess you do like the same thing”
I

looked at kylie as if to say go and get changed.
“Well don’t look at me I'm not getting changed” kylie said
“fine I will” I said and
then I found the cutest outfit it was a devil with a black tight dress that was as short as a mini skirt this was perfect because this really cute boy called Logon was coming with as.
“I’ve got what I want” I said to mum
“don’t you have to try it on it might be to small” mum said
“the smaller the better I said”
mum said kids these days.
The next day at school me and Mozzi, Clauds, Hannah and Xenia were talking about the
trick or treating and how we had condensed all of the boys that we like into coming with as and how was having how and I said that I was having Logon of course. We decider that we would go to Mozzie’s to get ready we couldn’t get ready at my house because mum hadn't seen what I was wearing and no way would she let me go out in it so we thought that it would be safest at Mozzie’s. When school finished I walked home with Clauds when I got home I run in and grabbed my out fit and make up and run down stirs I managed to grab a apple on my way thought

the kitchen
“bye love” mum said
as I run passed.
When Mozzi was finished doing my make up I was looking as hot as ever. We met up with Logon and his friends Logon said that I was looking amazing
Logon was dressed up has the grem reaper I mean what can I say we were perfect together.
We were with the boys for half the night but then us girls cared on with out them but then we heard a scream we turned to look at the direction where it came from
“come on lets go and see what happened” Hannah said curiously
“no way”


Clauds said
xenia said “come on its not like there is a murder or something come on”
“ok” I said
so we went down to fined a person lying on the ground dead I leant over to xenia and
said “I think that you spoke to soon”
Clauds said “I will call the polices” .The police arrived we were all kinds of scared we were walking to Mozzi’s because we were staying the night there we weren't to far from the last murder when we heard a noise in a bush next to the walk way Clauds screamed

A girl crawled out of the bush she was stabbed in one side I saw the murder running away
I said “to the girls call the police I will try to catch them”
I run my hardest but could not catch them I stop running I turned I was lost I was scared and cold
“Jo Jo is that you” Logon said
I smiled Logon was their behind me
“what are you doing out here” logon said
“I was trying to catch the murderer” I said
“well I’m sorry but I won’t give in’ Logon said
‘what are you talking about” I said in a confused voice
“I’m the murder and I really like you but I can’t let any one find out I’m sorry” Logon said
“no” I said

I started to run Logon chased me I pick up a rock and threw it at him it hit him in the head it Knocked him out. The police arrived they took Logon to the prison that night all us girls were high on sugar because the girl that crawled out of the bush’s name is Lily and she is now our bestie and her family was so grateful for saving her they bought us a truck load of lollies! How ever logon is still in prison and his brother came around to apologize for Logon’s behaviour, and we have been going out for 2 years now, and he is way HOTTER!!
By Brier-Rose Prouse-Morris
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